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People gather to watch executions.
I've never understood why. What possible reason could they have for wanting to see a stranger's life end? Do they want to see their head roll? Hear the snap of their neck? Do they want to be sure that it's real?
I can assure you, this is real. I've wished more times than I can count that it was a nightmare, an illusion; I've looked for mistakes made by my sleeping brain— and I've found none. This is absolutely happening.
I'm waiting in a room on my own. The bed's uncomfortable. It creaks whenever I sit down on it- so I'm standing. I've bitten my nails so much that my hands are bleeding, raw and painful. Earlier, they gave me a pristine white gown to wear. It's itching horribly at the collar, but I daren't touch it. What would they do to me, if I dared get blood on what was not mine?
A woman opens the door and takes my arm, leading me to where the crowds are waiting. I thought once that I knew her well. But how could I know she was capable of condemning me to this? She leads me past the throng of people, and I hear them catch their breath as one. There are people I know in the audience. A little girl makes to wave, but her mother snatches her hand when it is only halfway into the air.
I take my place at the front, and the woman slinks off to join the audience. The man before me begins to speak, but his voice simply washes over me. I wait for my part. Eventually he turns to me, but I hear him speak as though underwater. The words resolve themselves in my head, and I answer.
'I do.'
When the ring is shoved roughly onto my finger, the audience begin to clap. The applause sounds like the breaking of bones, like the thud of an axe.
I've never understood why. What possible reason could they have for wanting to see a stranger's life end? Do they want to see their head roll? Hear the snap of their neck? Do they want to be sure that it's real?
I can assure you, this is real. I've wished more times than I can count that it was a nightmare, an illusion; I've looked for mistakes made by my sleeping brain— and I've found none. This is absolutely happening.
I'm waiting in a room on my own. The bed's uncomfortable. It creaks whenever I sit down on it- so I'm standing. I've bitten my nails so much that my hands are bleeding, raw and painful. Earlier, they gave me a pristine white gown to wear. It's itching horribly at the collar, but I daren't touch it. What would they do to me, if I dared get blood on what was not mine?
A woman opens the door and takes my arm, leading me to where the crowds are waiting. I thought once that I knew her well. But how could I know she was capable of condemning me to this? She leads me past the throng of people, and I hear them catch their breath as one. There are people I know in the audience. A little girl makes to wave, but her mother snatches her hand when it is only halfway into the air.
I take my place at the front, and the woman slinks off to join the audience. The man before me begins to speak, but his voice simply washes over me. I wait for my part. Eventually he turns to me, but I hear him speak as though underwater. The words resolve themselves in my head, and I answer.
'I do.'
When the ring is shoved roughly onto my finger, the audience begin to clap. The applause sounds like the breaking of bones, like the thud of an axe.
Literature
As a writer
1. As a writer, saying random crap (and receiving unnecessary attention) is...
Normal...
* * *
In class...
MICHELLE: (reading a handout) So Jane Seymour was the third wife of Henry VIII.
ME: Mmm... (Thinking to self) But then how could a male character be that good-looking after the gun fight...? It wouldn't make sense unless--
MICHELLE: (Taps me) Hey? Do you get this?
ME: (slams right hand onto desk) Of course!
MICHELLE: Huh?
ME: (Looks up with a euphoric expression) He must be metro-sexual!
MICHELLE: (Glancing at the other staring people) Er...
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Literature
Writer's block
The pencil lies idly next to the notebook.
The icon on the computer screen blinks almost in a mocking fashion, the keys gathering dust.
That notebook is opened to a fresh page, not a letter or eraser shaving on it.
That computer is opened up to a new document, again, no words on it, not even the use of undo or redo as a sign that maybe something was once there.
And there's not a damn thing I can do about it.
I can think of few things in this world that are as frustrating.
Literature
A Writer's Commandments
1. Thou shalt remember thy purpose of writing. Never forget why thou wanted to beest a writer.
2. Thou shalt not plagiarize another writer's work. It's disgusting.
3. Thou shalt remember thou art human. Humans maketh mistakes.
4. When thou shalt face rejection or failure, ALWAYS rise up again. Persistence is the force that helps us climbeth the pillars to success.
5. Thou shalt devoteth thyself to thou's craft wholeheartedly. How serious art thou about thy writing, HMMM???
6. Respect thy fellow writers, for their acknowledgement is thy true validation.
7. Thou shalt not deny one's creativity or be ashamed of thy quirkiness. Thou may see
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Meet Carrie, an extremely reluctant bride- with good reason. She seems to be my favourite character at the moment, so be warned- we'll be seeing a lot more of her!
As always, feedback is much appreciated. This is the first piece I've put on here with any of my main characters in it- I'm very excited!
Molls x
As always, feedback is much appreciated. This is the first piece I've put on here with any of my main characters in it- I'm very excited!
Molls x
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Interesting twist at the end! Certainly kept me waiting and wondering what her predicament could be- but no, it was only a wedding. Really well done!